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	<title>Comments on: Fix-It Friday</title>
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		<title>By: Kim Reynolds</title>
		<link>http://sharigreen.wordpress.com/2009/06/26/fix-it-friday-2/#comment-1462</link>
		<dc:creator>Kim Reynolds</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Dec 2009 18:06:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I actually have revised this way for a few years. I do it just slightly different though. I print out the piece or chapter, but then I start revising at the top of the document, as if it was a fresh draft. I push the text down by at least a page so I can&#039;t see it on the screen. This way, if there is a paragraph or two that I&#039;m happy with I can scroll down, cut and paste it, and save some time (I&#039;m a slow typist).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I actually have revised this way for a few years. I do it just slightly different though. I print out the piece or chapter, but then I start revising at the top of the document, as if it was a fresh draft. I push the text down by at least a page so I can&#8217;t see it on the screen. This way, if there is a paragraph or two that I&#8217;m happy with I can scroll down, cut and paste it, and save some time (I&#8217;m a slow typist).</p>
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		<title>By: Shari</title>
		<link>http://sharigreen.wordpress.com/2009/06/26/fix-it-friday-2/#comment-1214</link>
		<dc:creator>Shari</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Jun 2009 18:19:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I know, me too! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I know, me too! <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Stephanie</title>
		<link>http://sharigreen.wordpress.com/2009/06/26/fix-it-friday-2/#comment-1213</link>
		<dc:creator>Stephanie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Jun 2009 17:20:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>OOOhhh....I think I might have to try this one.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OOOhhh&#8230;.I think I might have to try this one.</p>
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		<title>By: Shari</title>
		<link>http://sharigreen.wordpress.com/2009/06/26/fix-it-friday-2/#comment-1212</link>
		<dc:creator>Shari</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 28 Jun 2009 18:30:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The idea of forcing your brain into create mode rather than correct mode makes total sense to me, but for sure I can relate to your hesitancy to start with a blank screen -- good idea to try it when revising a chunk of the ms!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The idea of forcing your brain into create mode rather than correct mode makes total sense to me, but for sure I can relate to your hesitancy to start with a blank screen &#8212; good idea to try it when revising a chunk of the ms!</p>
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		<title>By: Shari</title>
		<link>http://sharigreen.wordpress.com/2009/06/26/fix-it-friday-2/#comment-1211</link>
		<dc:creator>Shari</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 28 Jun 2009 18:27:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Starting with a blank screen would probably freak me out just a little, but I can see the wisdom in it! I think I&#039;ll try it next time.

Thanks for dropping by my blog, Martha. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Starting with a blank screen would probably freak me out just a little, but I can see the wisdom in it! I think I&#8217;ll try it next time.</p>
<p>Thanks for dropping by my blog, Martha. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Carol Garvin</title>
		<link>http://sharigreen.wordpress.com/2009/06/26/fix-it-friday-2/#comment-1210</link>
		<dc:creator>Carol Garvin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Jun 2009 15:24:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;i&gt;&quot;It’s too easy to get hung up on the way it was rather than feel free to make it what it needs to be.&quot;&lt;/i&gt;

That makes sense, too. Sometimes I find myself rearranging the same words instead of finding a better way to express an idea. I&#039;m not sure I have the fortitude to start over with a totally blank slate, although maybe it would work well for me when re-writing isolated portions of the ms.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><i>&#8220;It’s too easy to get hung up on the way it was rather than feel free to make it what it needs to be.&#8221;</i></p>
<p>That makes sense, too. Sometimes I find myself rearranging the same words instead of finding a better way to express an idea. I&#8217;m not sure I have the fortitude to start over with a totally blank slate, although maybe it would work well for me when re-writing isolated portions of the ms.</p>
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		<title>By: Martha Flynn</title>
		<link>http://sharigreen.wordpress.com/2009/06/26/fix-it-friday-2/#comment-1209</link>
		<dc:creator>Martha Flynn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Jun 2009 05:01:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow!  That&#039;s really dedicated - I clearly have a ways to go in my technique.  Thanks for sharing!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow!  That&#8217;s really dedicated &#8211; I clearly have a ways to go in my technique.  Thanks for sharing!</p>
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