Finding the unexpected

I find a lot of interesting things on the beach. Some belong there, like this:

puget sound king craband this:

pacific blood star

But sometimes I discover things that don’t belong (are you singing it? one of these things is not like the other, one of these things just isn’t the same…). Things like this:

rusty tankand this:

flash driveI found that flash drive yesterday. At first, I thought of it as garbage, but then…what if it had important stuff on it? I tucked it in my pocket with the sea glass I’d already collected.

The USB connector was rusted and full of sand, but after cleaning it up a little I popped it into my old beater don’t-care-if-this-flash-drive-wrecks-it-more laptop and discovered pictures of a family’s vacation and a single Word file. The Word file contained, among other things, a name and local address. I found the guy on Facebook (we have two mutual friends, it turns out…gotta love small towns), messaged him, and reunited him with his flash drive a short time later.

Sometimes when I’m writing I discover unexpected things, too–things about my characters, maybe, or even things about myself. And I think when these unexpected things appear, I should pay attention. Maybe they’re nothing, but then again, maybe they’re something–a new insight, a new truth, a portal to a richer story or a richer understanding of myself.

Do you ever surprise yourself when you’re writing? Are the unexpected things that turn up in your writing usually cut later, or do they turn out to be important?

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12 thoughts on “Finding the unexpected

  1. I’m constantly surprised, and I can’t think of a single time the surprise hasn’t improved the story.

    Very cool about the flash drive. You’re a good little detective, and a good Samaritan too.

    • “can’t think of a single time the surprise hasn’t improved the story” — I love that, and it reminds me that I need to trust more — trust my instincts, my subconscious, my secret word-elf who pops those surprises into my manuscript when I’m not looking. ;)

  2. I believe in the importance of unexpected things.

    If I were to find a flash drive, I would never think I could return it back to the owner, yet you proved it’s doable and that it’s really a small world.

  3. I surprise myself all the time when I’m writing, since I never outline. This is a blessing and a curse.

    I love this post and I love that you checked to see what was on the drive. Good on you that you went so far as to return it to its owner.

  4. I almost always surprise myself when writing. The plot will take an unexpected turn or a character will decide to do or say something I hadn’t imagined before. Sometimes I have to cut the surprises in the end, but they at least help me figure out what *doesn’t* work (and sometimes reveal a bit of a character too, which is always helpful!).

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